Book Review : Turned

Today's book review is over a free e book i picked up though google play called Turned by Morgan Rice. This is the first book in the Vampire Journals. This book is poorly written the grammar is bad along with sentences that are fragmented.( i know i'm not one to judge but if i can tell it kinda bad.) There seems to be words missing or out of order.the story it self is a good start it gripping it draws the readers in and make them want to know what is going on who is the good guy and who is the bad guy and the pace is fast. with that said some off the character fall flat in the book there no real depth to them. over all i give this book 3 out of five stars. i like the story but the missing words tripped me up at point making have to read the line again to make sure i knew what the author was saying.